Sunday, November 2, 2014

You And Me Comments

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You are my past,
You are my present, too,
You are my future, as well,
I don't care,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Heather Wilkins 11 November 2014

beautiful poem of love have a kiss of the eyes be a little shy nice writing

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Salini Nair 04 November 2014

journey of future, With the souls that are free, Free to fly like clouds, Who can stop the clouds? ..........................beautifully presented lost love....

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Khalida Bano Ali 03 November 2014

A beautiful poem on lost love.

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Saheb Mohapatra 03 November 2014

beautifully described the feelings of a lover.........yes, a lover is an enemy, also a friend which loves that never dies........good poem.....thanks

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 November 2014

Beautiful poem describing where love can flow beyond this mortal body and love can meet even in eternal souls. Beautiful examples of great lovers who gave away their life for their love. Beautiful presentation. Loved reading it.

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 03 November 2014

The love and truth walked side by side Sufism - The Haqeeqi love and that was the truth as symbolism nice one

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Valsa George 03 November 2014

With the souls that are free, Free to fly like clouds, Who can stop the clouds? Though separated physically, the lovers hope to meet in spirit form! Like clouds, their spirits are free to roam anywhere! A great poem on the immortality of man- woman love!

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