Saturday, October 12, 2013

You And Me Comments

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You and me
Let us be kids
Run behind the butterfly
Like free air,
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Aftab Alam
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Tristan Love-day 25 October 2013

: O *votes* keep it up-you, my friend have a talent :)

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Ibnu Din Assingkiri 22 October 2013

it's a wow! 10. grown-ups full of hatred, lets be kids forever. :)

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Marvin Brato 21 October 2013

Truly amazing sentiments, poetic and profound!

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Heather Wilkins 20 October 2013

your last stanza so lovely and pure. Getting away from the world such a lovely thought.

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