Wednesday, February 1, 2012

You And Me…12-12 Comments

Rating: 0.0

Clouds float as billowing clumps,
seeding life deep in earth.
Wandering across the lazy humps,
goat and gazelle shading birth.
...
Read full text

saadat tahir
COMMENTS
Yasmin Khan 17 February 2013

Vivid images and personification...to be one with Nature an surrounding makes this poem a lovely read.

0 0 Reply
Neela Nath Das 12 March 2012

Marvelous word picture! Admirable indeed.

0 0 Reply
Malini Kadir 13 February 2012

distant honk that steamers make, waft across those waters green. as dancing salmon in their wake, showoff style and their sheen...... I love the picture your words create........in my mind

1 0 Reply
Wahab Abdul 10 February 2012

what a great poem it is! very picturesque , a simply great poem, i like it very much, the poem deserves 100/100. and please read my new poems.

0 0 Reply
Seema Chowdhury 09 February 2012

very nice and refreshing poem. written from the heart with deep feelings.

0 0 Reply
Shahzia Batool 04 February 2012

Light language Nature's freshness Alternate rhyme...bound in beat n rhythm no you tube...wonderful!

0 0 Reply
Vipins Puthooran 04 February 2012

It's a beautiful poem, rich in images/

0 0 Reply
saadat tahir

saadat tahir

Islamabad-Pakistan
Close
Error Success