Wednesday, January 14, 2009

You And Me Comments

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I look at you..
You look at me..

'please tell me what you see when you look at me? '
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Joscelyn Alderdice
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Eyan Desir 01 February 2009

this came deep from the heart, good way of expressing your feelings

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Barbara Terry 14 January 2009

This is a very deep poem of self examination. How many people can or will, look inside of themselves and give themselves a critical review? Not many, especially not many men who feel there is nothing to review. Little do they know. This is another poem that makes the reader look inside at who, and how they are. A 10+ and thank you for sharing. Love & hugs, Barbara

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