Friday, October 5, 2012

You And I Forever Comments

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Only you have the key to my heart
Our souls will never part
This love is one to cherish
These dreams shall never perish
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persian khushi
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Nader Baheri 11 October 2012

nice meaningful rhythmic job. tnx for sharing

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Allemagne Roßmann 07 October 2012

Words pining for the loved ones-nice poetic thoughts displayed

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Harindhar Reddy 06 October 2012

Let You and he (i mean protagonists in the poem dance in romance in the poem :) :) . As poet U r talented! ! ! !

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