Sunday, January 24, 2016

You And I Are As One Comments

Rating: 5.0

Sexual devotion
in a surreal slower motion
dangerous, convincing, love mixing
healing, the bitter self-killer…
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Michael Walkerjohn
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Roseann Shawiak 26 January 2016

Love all the descriptive and enticing words you use throughout the poem, normally I probably wouldn't like that, but you have done such a splendid job of adding feeling and emotion to the words, that I actually like it! Fascinating poem, read it several times, it's rhythm makes it like a song of devotion and love.10+++ Great poem Michael! Thank you for sharing it. RoseAnn

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