You And I (A Reverie) Comments

It reads ever better the aecond time..Wonderfully worded!

Inside the mirror of dreams! ! Thanks for sharing.

Loaded with a love that is lively! Wonderful words my friend!

Your poem is more than the atmosphere of the romantic, as your friend requested; it is a celebration of requited love in which all of nature joins in the joy of the lovers. There are no boundaries between Self and Beloved, or between them and the World, or between their Joy and the ups and downs of life.Everything is balanced according to human desire. Oh, how I love this poem which you call a REVERIE and a FANTASY, words which come from the other side of experience, suggesting this Great Love experience is - temporary. No, no, no! I want to believe, I need to believe, I will believe - IT'S ALL TRUE AS YOU TELL IT, and thanks for telling it.

How the crescent moon In conversation with the brightest star looks So do we look, together Wrapped in love Stealing the glow of heavens, Exhibiting in our eyes The glory of immortal love. - - - - - - - - - - - -A very beautiful romantic poem one would surely fall in love.

It may be winter but spring is in the air where your heart lives! ! I vote for your friend asking you to write another something romantic cuz it is cold here in the snow drifts and this poem warms a body up. Excellent write... just need more of same. 10 :)

Fantasy or memory - it does not matter. All can remember those feelings. Very well done.10

You have kick started the year with a wonderful love song! Let such warmth of togetherness be realized in your life this year! Happy New Year... my gifted friend!

There are those people that dismiss this romantic love. They seem so eager to tell you that things will become mundane and that you will learn to make the best of it. They are the same people that would not understand that you have never tired of the crescent moon and the brightest star or spring buds and acts of kindness. The mast on the ship of their lives is not patterned in multi-colored splendor. Wrapped in love, stealing the glow of heaven.

a very interesting read, I like it. Keep writing, it truly brings you into this fantasy of love yet evoking feelings or longing for true love from deep within. thanks for sharing.

A wonderful poem on love. Only those who have experienced love can understand what these lines mean: You and I, under vast skies Hands held, eyes locked Feeling the surge of waves... And, ou and I, under vast skies Hands held, eyes locked Feeling the surge of waves Beautiful..Loved reading. Shall come back..1000++++

Stealing the glow of heavens, very nice! Love poems are by far the best poetry.

A little romance at the beginning of the year is the need of the time. The years are flying past, we seldom get time to sit back and think about love and romance at least by reading your beautiful poem we can breath fresh air of romance, Thanks for sharing this romantic poem.10+++