Friday, April 2, 2010

You And I Comments

Rating: 5.0

You are as gentle as a candle
Thorny and tricky to handle
Love sparks glowing bright
Trail is seen even without light...
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lady grace
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 June 2010

Agree with Sr. Poet Almeda…You and ‘I’ in Unison…Immixed and Intuned…not spaced out...rhapsodic 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 13 April 2010

If I could travel and spread the words The secrets I would tell around the globe You and I are creators of love You and I bring joy to paradise.............true love pasion, , oldie you have realized what the love is... bautiful n nice.....10 rea mine nice to hold... what woman needs

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Rajinder Singh 13 April 2010

lovely poem very well written

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Almedia Knight-Oliver 12 April 2010

'You and I' are imbued with compassion and love. a heartfelt poem and a 10

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Eyan Desir 02 April 2010

haha very convining write these words are hard to imagine but reality comes to light in poems fine poetic write....

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C. P. Sharma 02 April 2010

Let I into you submerge From there will God's Grace emerge. CP

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