Tuesday, September 11, 2007

You And I Comments

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Like a river flow
With passion of melody so down and low
With an embrace so warm and tender
We will grow fonder
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Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi
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Bob Blackwell 23 August 2008

You are right nothing is stronger than love. Lovely poem

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Yonela Mali 04 October 2007

wow that is just beautiful

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jazmine kristen 22 September 2007

WOW.....so much emotion I love it! ! !

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Dr.subhendu Kar 22 September 2007

That flap like the wings of the dove....................excellent imagery of love i love it, thanks for sharing

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Alexander Steen Stewart 14 September 2007

hey first off thanks for the comment and i found your poem amazing: D

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Marcia Morris 11 September 2007

nice write, however I think you should work on the 8th line. It's the longest line.Keep writing!

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Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi

Alancia Lebogang Mogorosi

South Africa< Mpumalanga
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