Tuesday, February 16, 2016

You And I Comments

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My thoughts and I
Clinging together like
Sediment and water
You and I like river banks
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Savita Tyagi
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Valsa George 18 February 2016

You and I like river banks Together yet apart. A longing for togetherness brought by memories and heightened by beautiful images of Nature which speak of lovely companionship! A beautiful poem on love and longing!

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Savita Tyagi 18 February 2016

Thank you so much Valsa. Value your comment so much.

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Mark Heathcote 17 February 2016

Awesome write nice one, picture painting of nature; body & soul.

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Savita Tyagi 17 February 2016

Thank you so much Mark. Value your words very much.

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Rajnish Manga 16 February 2016

Emotions apart, the ethereal portrayal of nature provides wholesome delight: Crescent moon in oak Your eye brow painted in sky A kiss in memory.

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Savita Tyagi 16 February 2016

Thank you Rajnish. Happy that it delighted you.

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