Wednesday, January 29, 2014

You And I Comments

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I am the rose, you are the thorn,
I am the calm, you are the storm,
I am the light, you are the dark,
You are the kindling, I am the spark
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Lora Colon
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Ivory Irving 15 February 2014

Two opposites trying to make it work but it won't if only one is putting in the effort so- enough is enough. That's how I see it. Love this, so true.

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Mac Adrone Adonay 07 February 2014

there is a nice flow of rhythm, wise use of words.

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Pradip Chattopadhyay 30 January 2014

a dark satire, a different tune for Lora, but still a delight to read.

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Lora Colon

Lora Colon

Missouri - United States
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