Monday, April 9, 2012

You And I Comments

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You Were There Always,
But There Must Have Been a Way To Approach You,
I'm a Product Of Your Love,
But You're Nowhere To Be Found!
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Utsav Patel 08 September 2013

Wow! ! ! ! The pain of being separated painted so well... According to me, we all are individual souls... We came alone and we will go alone... In between we cry, fight, love and hate... But the ultimate truth is death...! ! ! You can wait fir it or go towards it... Both is same! !

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Ramesh Rai 03 May 2012

Amazing. first time i m seeing on line. xlent write. I've Put My Heart And Soul In You, Now I Wanna See You Involving In My Love As I Did Earlier, As The Taste Of The Pudding Lies In Its Eating.

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Anil Kumar Panda 01 May 2012

'The breeze of sadness.... density of life' ia so beautiful a stanza.nice poem.liked it.

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Sharad Juneja 20 April 2012

Oh god now that was touchng..beautifully penned down...

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