Wednesday, April 26, 2017

You And I Comments

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you and i
let's travel far away
far away to the dark side of moon
the side away from lights & noon
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Umair Khan
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Kim Barney 26 April 2017

A very romantic poem. You have promise as a writer. Keep it up, and welcome to Poem Hunter!

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Umair Khan 27 April 2017

Thanks Kim for your kind words :)

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Babatunde Aremu 26 April 2017

Nice poem. I can feel love in the air. Keep on writing. Good job

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Umair Khan 27 April 2017

Thanks sir, i will try to continue :)

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