Thursday, May 6, 2010

You And I Comments

Rating: 2.8

These veins are ink
On the plane across the window
To write itself
The perspective goes too deep
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 01 June 2010

Finely sculpted…nice imagery…no zigzag…so many options ‘create illusion’, ‘sink’, ‘run’, ‘sing’, ‘prayer’…pick up as you like…musical bonanza and emotional fiesta 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

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