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beautiful tribute poem to Grandparents //// you and me on the flying wings of imagination to the delighted sun we are safe there as the part of galaxies.....................

Passing time with grandparents is remarkable. Though they are no more yet their love and affection is unforgettable. It is a nice tribute to them having touching penmanship. Thank you dear Soul for sharing this lovely one.

Forever this way! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Grandparents are, unfortunately, often overlooked, and too quickly forgotten. You will be blessed, Soul, for remembering to honor them. Heartwarming!

This is a tittle of the last Bernard Bertolluci's film

You just a bright day and I am night prime We maybe separated by space and time but together we are one To be a complete day.......... These are wonderful lines.... goes like a lyric..... thank you for the poem!

Reading your poem is perfect treat as it is like watching Niagara fall s from close proximity. You and I make a promise..... What start to the poem, It is fascinating to read such sensitive poems especially when human values are under threat............. A loud cheers to the poet soul! With Heart and soul......

Reading your poem is perfect treat as it is like watching Niagara fall s from close proximity. You and I make a promise..... What start to the poem, It is fascinating to read such sensitive poems especially when human values are under threat............. A loud cheers to the poet soul! With Heart and soul......

So inspiring poem. I liked the last part [ You are a day, live under a cloudy blue sky and I am the dark night Blanket by the black sky and shiny stars] Its like saying that each one of you complete the other one, Day and Night!

Good layout poem and easy to read....very romantic poem if ones read aloud to the loved one..I rated this poem 8/10.

Beautiful poem and i like so much end of poem, the unity you have created between 'day' and ' night' as among 'you and i', an universal, indestructible bond..Cristina Teodor

this is a sweet, beautiful piece...

The concept of sweet memories, responsibilities, oaths centered around a Relationship is beautifully expressed in this poem. I really appreciate the technique of implementation of an abstract idea through a well designed process.

A well worded mystic poem.

Good poem and well exposed relation with the dearest one. Love and live....the ultimate wisdom could be the reach of a social human being. Write more......run long and excavate your soul to write.........10/10 Regards, pranab

for the same feelig i walked across the jungs for four years when i prayed with god to be with complete but i spent four years alone becaus my oath and compassion for only one. Still now she is away from me Be a nice poem with warm A Ummar

You and I Share millions of memories Permanently in full phase impossible to erase... these are powerful universal lines of insight

There z great power and rythm when u get closer to the end...together we are one...i liked that one.beautiful! dats da 1st poem av read by u unwritten soul bt am impressed.

Hi girl you have good art. Good in setag meaninful words in love. Everyone also had the love. And you had the love in your poem. This is really beautiful and nice write. The love indeed never ending. Keep always your love and your romance poem. 10+i like romance tanks

A very beautiful poem..that depicts your heart so beautifully.. I just loved it and yes, it suits with every relationship. Wonderful.