Tuesday, August 25, 2009

You And I Comments

Rating: 5.0

Two never-ending parallel lines
You and I are.
They never meet, never separate either.
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Shakuntala Sharma
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Matt Mooney 07 September 2009

A brilliant way of saying it. It's all a mystery anyway but your poem poses some good questions about the alignment of our paths in the business of compatibility and daily living.Maybe love is the element we will never fully appreciate. It's like health. When we have it we are not fully aware of it.10.

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Colton Foltz 06 September 2009

this poem is amazing! 10++. thank you for the comment

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Sai Saketh 04 September 2009

Very nice poem indeed....... It shows a depth of infinity....

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Nikunj Sharma 31 August 2009

you have an element of divinity, a cosmic ray of the sorts in this poem...very sweet and simply written but the depth of the meaning is heartwarming...please read my poem called MAGNETS....which has a similar end (almost) , also read and rate LET HER NOT SACRIFICE ANYMORE...in my poems

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C. P. Sharma 28 August 2009

You move on a high poetic plane. Beautiful poetry, profound thought. CP

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