Wednesday, August 21, 2013

You And Alcohol Comments

Rating: 5.0

You know what the thing is? I've never done this before. I
have always been in control, I've always chosen what I do
and what I say.
And alcohol is something that nips away your control at the bud.
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Rambling Dreamer
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Brian Jani 26 May 2014

Nice flow of words well done

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Aswath Raman 21 August 2013

A poem which criticizes and corners the reasons for an insane moment. This is a beautiful write except i fert you could edit out some lines! Good one dreamer!

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Anil Kumar Panda 21 August 2013

very nice.straight from the heart it flows so nice.liked it.

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Nikita Das 21 August 2013

Thank you so much :)

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Dave Walker 21 August 2013

A great poem, like it, a great write.

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Khairul Ahsan 21 August 2013

No use blaming, try to get out of it soon!

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