more... i heard
your passion
pigmenting new desire
as sweet as grapes
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Superb poem, I liked it.....my pick from your poem....10 i focus my eyes on you looking at your inner soul
A remarkable poem, very well written, stems from the heart of a romantic person. Thank you, RoseAnn
Great job... I cant wait to read more. I hope you would return the favor. :)
beautiful poems don't just happen like that...such a wordy world of a poetic mind.
A gentle ode to a loved one using nature's wonder as a yardstick which I'm sure it would be pleasing to recieve..thanks regards
wowwwwwwwwww! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! beautiful.........what a great write............i wish someone had written that to me! ! hehe......10 plus my friend........superb! !
A stunning penning. The simple structure conveys the emotion and the slight occasional rhyme helps it along in its flow. Very impressive. x
Dear Sir Poet, marakep ya tula so ginawa yu salamat ya baled, diane