Every word from my mind to my pen
Each verse I create today since then
Every poem from my heart to my brain
To you I offer time and time again
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It is you who makes me-ME With you I am completely happy You are the one without a doubt The only one I can't live without. Thanks for sharing these nice feelings, for whoever they are meant. All lovers would be happy to hear such nice loving words. Over all, the poem is an excellent one, a reader's delight.
This poem has moved me so much,10 out of 10 (I would give more if possible) ! ! !
One of my favourites by you (no pun intended) it really showcases a good balance of ryhthm, and its a very infectious and warm message. Everyone could use your sentiments, very cheerful.
YOU AND YOU....means everything to me...(Suerte naman niya) sweet piece with wonderful rhymes.. it's like a music..refreshing..expressive...
Beautiful verses to express how unique can be for you someone you love.These rhymes are so soothing to my ears, so full with passion.Very nice poem..Cristina Teodor
You are the gentle breeze You relax and make me sane You make me laugh you make me smile You come rescuing in just a while You have done an embellishment very agile Poetry embraces your life like Egypt did with river Nile Superb write......
this poem is well written, that girl you speak of is very loved and i hope she knows it 4 she dont know what she may miss out on... to have someone that truely loves her. :)
Beautiful verse written from the lover to the beloved, the truth and pain of an absent lover expressed in 'I Miss You'.
That was nice relaxed rhyme to display an engaged and lovely poem.
Very enchanting indeed. The whole poem is full of the fragrance of love. Your dedication is really marvellous. Great write. Thank for sharing. Please read my poem 'My ultimate companion' on p.3
I applaud all the poets who have penned here the beautiful feelings of their beautiful minds, having read this beautiful piece of poetry. I find a share of my own feelings in each of the comments here. Long live love, the lovers and the loved ones!