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mark 10 nicely words are used. correction: big see = big sea. shan

Hi Milica O heart complain not about the congealed times which look like a rose-bud for' morning breeze will loosen such knots be hopeful... Ramin

Is it poetic soliloquizing with Poetic self? Ten Ms Nivedita New post: Lie Sly or other poems if you kindly read and comment. niv

Wow, I just adore one line though it's all wonderful: 'on your grave i will dance in my red high hills'. Might be a dance line forming behind you; you never can tell..(smile)

There is magic here...I think...'alone' is your knife with which you wound..twist...then it becomes a bit of a butterknife...magic! see ya down the road sjc