Sunday, September 13, 2009

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When i suffered from disappointments,
You was not there to face me,
And you was hiding, like an enemy,
A traitor with chain of promises,
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Sahar Sahar
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 September 2009

When a lier explains, Nothing gains, Before a truth, The truth is, You ruined my future, When i was a growing young. In husle, I decided to jump, ....treachery and deceit always hunts hunt's the person's mind all the times..one should not deceive another person inlife...this is clear thing and should be understood by all... good poem....10 read mine.. cowards....no separate ways....anywhere....beauty

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C. P. Sharma 14 September 2009

Intense feelings vehemently penned. Soulful poetry. Keep it up. CP

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Petra Soliman 13 September 2009

it's amazing, i love every & each line of it :) keep writing! ! ! xx

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