Wednesday, August 12, 2009

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I lie awake on my bed each night
I toss and turn with no way out
I’m thinking of you each day and night
I look around and see your smile
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Tharindu Atukorala
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 12 August 2009

You my love, Satan’s son You I wish I never loved! these lines crown the poem. very lucidly and authentically written.10 marks. shan

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Tharindu Atukorala

Tharindu Atukorala

Colombo, Sri Lanka
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