Saturday, June 27, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

Totally Sleepless
With thoughts of you on my mind
Is it sin?
Your one of a kind
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Lii Taito
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Ritty Patnaik 09 July 2009

lovely poem from a young girl! enjoyed reading it.

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Ritty Patnaik 09 July 2009

lovely poem from a young girl! enjoyed reading it.

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Alex Lewis 09 July 2009

I prefer darker poems, but this one was a great write!

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Michael Gale 07 July 2009

Falling so far and fast that you are dizzily having nose bleeds. Ha! Ha! Just kidding! Great write. God bless us all-MJG.

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Antonio Valentino 27 June 2009

Very enjoyable. Thanks for posting. Antonio

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Nooruddeen Mm 27 June 2009

Yes Lii, Sleeplessness is the first change in one's life when love starts and that nights are full of thoughts.it looks you carry it for ages.. hope it will come true, but don't hide. A good love poem with good writing. Noor

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