Monday, July 5, 2010

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You are the reason why.
You are the sting of peroxide on my arm.
You are my insecurity.
You are the lies I have to tell my parent.
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Jennifer K
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Benjamin Feliciano 05 July 2010

Hey, thanks for your comment. Those four poems were the result of a bad relationship about a year or two ago. Plus side of bad relationships is having something to write about (this poem here is another example) . I like this. Seems like from what I've read of your work you're in a fairly transitional part of your life. Keep writing, these are some of the best times to document your life.

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