You Poem by Sarvesh Kulkarni

You

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Your eyes are the eternity's expression of its absoluteness,
The culmination of life's chaos in one final silence of the unexpressed.
You are a pure consciousness.
An abstract cognition.
A transcendence of mortality.
Death in its essence.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sadiqullah Khan 10 September 2008

your first poem written with zeal, , great thoughts, , keep writing

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, aryaindia 11 September 2008

I love the fullness of your expression that sets the ball of imagination rolling well past the conciousness of this life into the next. Blessings, arya

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Rakhi Jayashankar 27 September 2008

The expression of the heart deep imagination nice work

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Ritty Patnaik 16 November 2009

'you '....absolutely stunned me with this lovely poem.fantastic write. ritty

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Indira Babbellapati 31 August 2009

the ever teasing, the ever intriguing, the ever eluding, the ever loving...the ever many more you! will we ever catch up with this you, sarvesh?

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Little Morning Star 20 January 2009

surprising ending.. great work..

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Neha Aradhye 31 October 2008

Your eyes are the eternity's expression of its absoluteness.. awesome! ! ! :)

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Pooja Ladyluck 25 October 2008

final silence of the unexpressed.........this frgament is so complete n whole in itself.........gr8 tht......luved ur poem......thanx yaar

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