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Great poem with profound metaphors and fortified emotions.

simplicity of your poems, makes one wonder at the depth of the meanings they hold in their heart.........wow is the word for this one.....

Lovely words..A pleasure to read

There is a great sadness present here that is unspoken. The clarity is lacking but the yearning is not. Greenwolfe 1962

your love is surplus..........shown in your write...............

love when bestirred by the breath seems to be besortted...............as sways by the rose, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , love wishful bedazzled in blue, well penned,10/10, thanks for sharing