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'One day you’ll wake up From this horrible dream Then there no one else Will be around Just You and You ' Such intense poetery i loved it +++++++++10 anju

'One day you’ll wake up From this horrible dream Then there no one else Will be around Just You and You' Wonderful poem. 10+

interesting... i like the fact that when you mentioned the preson you said 'You' and not 'you'. puts a whole different perspictive on it. it's great thanks

Wow....Great poem and is very true!

Another touching poem...so revealing life's arcane secrets....very well written congrats. Bhayya....10

No correction, A well written poem

This is an amazing and innovative poem. There is an influence of classical urdu poetry, i think, though i might be wrong. But a wonderful way of expressing oneself. thanks.

you is you pal a good person for your pal

A thoughtful piece, and obviously addressed to self which is a novel idea.A Ten

A nice piece with you with a nice ending. Imagery is beautiful,10 for this.