Friday, May 9, 2008

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You laugh cause my heart is breaking. you dont know
your the cause. how can i belive you when you say
you'll love me forever when i've seen forever turn
into a day so how can i be so sure your here to
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Trinidad Villafranca
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Fallen Angle 30 May 2008

amazzzzing job thats is a fine poemm keep it you your on the road to sucess cause your poems speak the truth no one wants to say and you found a way toi speak the truth good for you hope to read more

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 09 May 2008

your expression of love is straight forward and clear. kee[ it up

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