Your shining eyes excite:
Those pupils, fathomless black,
That grab, and drag me down
Into bottomless pits;
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beautifully written - sounds like she loves you already - perhaps she just can't express in words :)
Wow! how sweet, how could she fail to resist you after writing such lovely words, best wishes Lynda xx
A charming poem, Paul. Hope it does the trick! Love, Fran xx
Thanks Everyone. A fun write!