Monday, January 15, 2007

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Your shining eyes excite:
Those pupils, fathomless black,
That grab, and drag me down
Into bottomless pits;
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Paul Butters
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Paul Butters 19 August 2015

Thanks Everyone. A fun write!

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Tia Maria 06 July 2008

beautifully written - sounds like she loves you already - perhaps she just can't express in words :)

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Patricia Gale 10 May 2007

Lovely, she should fall right into the romantic verse.....

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Lynda Robson 16 January 2007

Wow! how sweet, how could she fail to resist you after writing such lovely words, best wishes Lynda xx

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Francesca Johnson 15 January 2007

A charming poem, Paul. Hope it does the trick! Love, Fran xx

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Paul Butters

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