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sort of special, I must say

It's nice It's like you are standing in a haze ofcourse this poem is good and all It's like you are looking at something divine through..well...through smoke Had I been less of a devil, I would have enjoyed it more Too much of divinity gives me diabetes but yeah....it has got a nice, ethereal touch to it liked it

tuk my breath away...it's so beautiful

'you aren’t crafted or created, you just are… like the vagrant expressions, of sunset'... your poetic eloquence reaches romantic high in these lines...10

sarvesh...mmmmm, U R...well, no words!

such terrific imagination.i loved the feel of the poem.

great, Sarvesh. i was floating in space reading this and landed on bottomless seas, still floatin. thanks. mark

Great imagery...........wonderful descriptive poetry.....very few can write this well.

wonderful poem sarvesh...great poetic expressions...10

An adorable tribute to a dear friend.