Thursday, October 13, 2005

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Rating: 4.1

your cute little nose,
the way your so sweet.
The beauty that goes,
from your head to your feet.
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Valerie Anderson
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Chuck Audette 27 December 2005

Hey, that's weird - I have a poem titled 'You' as well (a humorous ode to a certain female!) . -chuck

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Steve Armstrong 27 November 2005

Valerie, this is wonderful! I'm impressed with how you've managed to capture the male traits perfectly, not an easy thing to do, showing men in another light. Well done! ! !

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Kylee Anderson 23 November 2005

I think this is a good piece of poetry on how men can actually relate to their surrounding situations. Many women believe men are animals but they're actually very caring.

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