Tuesday, December 13, 2022

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Rating: 4.8

I conceal my true feelings
But if I confide them to you
You would probably laugh
And walk away
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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Anjandev Roy 21 March 2023

Magnificent short work......thank u for sharing..

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Anjandev Roy 17 January 2023

Excellent short work......thank u.....

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Anjandev Roy 28 December 2022

Very nice.....thanks for sharing.....

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Charlotte McMillen 15 December 2022

Beautifully expressed!

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Rob Lamberton 15 December 2022

To understand and be understood, a challenge many walk away from. Great poem! ! !

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If, in everybody's life there existed a ‘you' as pictured in the poem, the world would have been so different and colourful. Top score, LeeAnn

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M. Asim Nehal 15 December 2022

I am curious to hear....try. I liked your honesty in poem. Full *****

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 15 December 2022

You are truthful and honest dear LeeAnn. That makes this poem so endearing......10

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Nabakishore Dash 14 December 2022

But still express your love and the truth dear LeeAnn..

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MAHTAB BANGALEE 14 December 2022

So, to get you closest to my heart I'm silent!

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Anjandev Roy 13 December 2022

That's perfect......thanks for sharing.....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 December 2022

I mean to say that the poetess puts spotlight on 'you'

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 December 2022

You is focus here. Only the poetess knows what the title means to her though readers can guess a bit

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Richard Wlodarski 14 December 2022

And the 'guessing'' is where the challenge starts. Just like in all forms of art.

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Richard Wlodarski 13 December 2022

You might be pleasantly surprised.

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David Wood 13 December 2022

That's love's rich but confusing veiled tapestry

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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