Monday, April 9, 2018

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Like numerous twinkling stars in the sky
You also love to sing Twinkle! Twinkle!
Like the single moon shining in the sky
You are the only one who shines in my heart
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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2018

This is a beautiful poem on love and life having touching expression and nice dictions. You is a word which is most important in this love poem based on metaphor. It may be quoted......... Like the angel bringing joy in my dream You bring me comfort in my reality With the blessings including love and togetherness You changed the way I used to live my own life... Thanks for sharing.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2018

Like numerous twinkling stars in the sky love amazingly twinkles in heart and mind. In reality or dream love brings comfort. An amazing poem is very brilliantly penned...10

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