Friday, January 5, 2018

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You're still in my head, you're still words unsaid,
your palm holds the essence of life.
You devoured my mind, being cruel never kind,
your malice, to cut like a knife
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Lodigiana Poetess
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Susan Williams 05 January 2018

Again the voting booth doesn't work. I shall have to come back later and try again.

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Lodigiana Poetess 05 January 2018

haha the joys of modern technology! x Lodigiana

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Susan Williams 05 January 2018

Yes, our need for love does blind us but fortunate is the woman who frees herself in time. Very well handled topic and is poetic in its ability to reach out and enlist our presence inside the poem and inside that destructive relationship. Extraordinary. 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Lodigiana Poetess 05 January 2018

Thank you Susan, I agree totally with what you say about how easily love can blind us..I do so appreciate your positive and generous comments -thank you very much! Lodigiana x

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Rini Shibu 05 January 2018

Heartfelt poem.. Emotions well expressed

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Lodigiana Poetess 05 January 2018

Thank you so much Rini x Lodigiana

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