Wednesday, May 25, 2016

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You're something I can't catch
You're someone who I can't fetch
You find ways to get out of my reach
Remember the day on the deadly beach?
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Phoenix Blood
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Mysterious Writer 333 03 October 2016

Wow! I really like this poem and the way you connected one thing to another! It's sad, though... betrayal has become something common these days... but good job and well done!

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Tom Billsborough 25 May 2016

an interesting poem on betrayal. Like the Comic Strip idea Tom Billsborough

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