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I want you to heal, I want you to mend,
I want you to reach for the stars and transcend,
I want you to blossom, I want you to grow,
I want you to grab all your worries and throw,
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Suburban Lovechild
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Lawrence S. Pertillar 01 February 2015

Inspiring! So many times I had found myself disappointed by my own fears of being perceived by others as a failure. Until it dawned on me, I was making efforts to 'succeed'. And my foes were cheering on my defeat. While they made no effort to pursue their own endeavors. Very nice poem. Enjoyed it.

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