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In your Writing i am finding myself....well written..

You the FEELINGS thoroughly the veins and breath heart beats my sight to absorb you fully inside harem of azure-blue heart ... .../// lovely poem

Oh the Great Creator! Who are you? ' You just laughed at me. You are present Within us …. In the new morning, that starts with the last pain of the yesterday's sunset, you are present. What a kind of tremendous faith in the presence of the Almighty! ! i am astound with your faith. thank you dear Poetess

Beautiful poem about our Creator, enjoyed reading it. Siya_! !

Ruma, great thought you have presented here so thoughtfully...this piece is beautifully composed on a fine subject...yes, we feel Him everywhere...present within us! best~ shahzia

What a beauty! I was amazed. Kabir Das says....Kastoori kundali base mirig dhondhey ban mahi.....Aise ghat ghat Ram hain dunya dekhe nahi.

It's a beautiful poem. God is there in the destruction as well as in creation. He is there in pain, as also in pleasure and happiness. A poet can see God in all His manifestations.

A very powerful poem which invvokes the question of why such tragedy exists in a world where we supposedly are governed by a loving God. Can almost feel the anger and hopelessness in this great write.

very nice Ruma.beautiful ink.liked it.