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The title of this poem YOU strikes me as the essence of the poem. As a title it is the exact opposite of MY DARK PRINCE. YOU is the most direct address possible, it is completely unadorned without any cosmic imagery. And so instead of creating a visionary scene. this poem deals in everyday realities. Which is truly where love begins and from which it will either grow or wither. The speaker's concern about her partner's isolation shows two things - her loving care and his need to open up - and out. Ah, the challenge of love!

delicate emotions and convincing. simple words enable to create a life in any relationship i should raise my hat

This is wonderful, good job.

'anything for you i would do be there to hold your hand the pain you feel i understand' - So nice! 'i'm always here when you need me forever in love i hope we will be' - Innocent promises of love pristine!

very nice.full of love and care.liked it.