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So Precious Words Thumbs Up Really So Beautiful Poetry

One of your best poems................I liked it. A contrasting poetry with fine flow and flawless message.

for how they can file an F.I.R when in all crystalline way they love the killer…! ! ! After reading this poem and particularly the last three lines the pages of history make me shy of myself. I can't do anything except regretting what i did in past and what I am doing at present. A great poem.

I was moved. A very beautiful poem, Shahzia. Thank you for sharing. Peace

I felt your soul like a lighted candle Sometimes kindling the light though sometimes idly burning away but always on the flickering flame A beautiful love free verse with lot of good and beautiful figurative language Col Mohammad Khalid Khan

Feel the truth, mystery and pain in these words Shazia. Thank you x Searching for you to see you are no longer penning. Wish you well

A thought provoking love poem.Well done keep it up Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

A fascinating and intriguing write. Left me puzzled...Lovely poem.

I adore your emotion as well as your write.

What a strong relationship between exists between an individual and his ego is always a puzzle, yet to be solved. It might give comfort sometimes but most of the times it makes us sad. The narration technique is superb. Nice work Shazia,

Meaningful... enjoyed the read!

I enjoyed this poignant write. Really lifted me up to the skies. I must come back down to earth now. You is so lucky Enjoyed.

..a poetic sonata..that only a poetess of Shahzia's caliber can produce..poetry at its very epitome.. ..loved it..i will give you a perfect 10 for this brilliant display of writing..

Amazingly composed poem..it deserves 10+++

wel composition, nice observation and a lovely poem

beautiful writing Shahzia enjoyed the write

Ahh! Less words have I to reciprocate after reading such an amazing verse...... The ending is no less interesting as the rest of the read dear Poet pal.

Oh! I love this poem! I'm going to add it to my favorites. ;) I can't decide which stanza I liked most, because I loved all of it.10/10 :)

wow, wonderful versification, though theme is quite simple and has been treated frequently but from shazia' pen it seems quite fresh and exotic, treated absolutely brilliant. a garland of early spring roses for someone who inspired poets heart? there is much energy in this sweet song of admiration, one can feel the blaze of emotions and strong devotion. A brave and innovative mixing of class and creativity and a reflection of deep insight A smooth volley and swings of feelings threaded in this enchanting ballad. Poetry is not just a sharing of feelings but something different and special to be penned and Shazia is doing it.......... p.s. i am totally ignorant to the reference you made in your poem

A fascinating and intriguing write Shahzia, which leaves me somewhat puzzled.