Sunday, September 30, 2012

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Let there be light
You came along
And there was light
I told you from the beginning
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persian khushi
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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 05 October 2012

Heartfelt write sister, you really are in love.awesome poem friend. Siya_! !

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 01 October 2012

Wow a sweet pretty poem. Do read and coment on my newest pls too.

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Dr Syed Anwar Yarkhan Jilani 30 September 2012

Beautiful. Well written.

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Romeo Della Valle 30 September 2012

Wow! Outburst of the heart that clearly shows your great emotion and passion for this person! Beatufully inked and poignant.10+++ Thank you for sharing! Keep it up!

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Harindhar Reddy 30 September 2012

Maafi! do allow me to comment on this verse one more time: Glowing in the in dark are your words of love, I cherish, I die for you, I'm sorry it's written upon my heart.... Holy dooly, pure love flowed.... A marvelous expression, With umpteen wishes fly I am in the high, Kushiji :) Khshi kushi!

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Harindhar Reddy 30 September 2012

Oh cripes! Amazing way to feel ones love in this way, purity of sky without clouds, nakedness of blue water glossing in the sun are also seen here in the piece of beauty! Kudos to the Fellow soul, Persian Kushiji! 2 souls sit side by side, talking to the birds, watching the moon, eye to eye, heart to heart while purity of loved flowed in the divine Street!

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Allemagne Roßmann 30 September 2012

Very special person its dedicated to...its a good write

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