Monday, July 25, 2011

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What did God give to those who were alone?
a family to own
what happened to those who lost theirs?
who cares?
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Kranthi Pothineni 25 July 2011

Thoughtful piece. Couplets are good with a smooth flow. Title is interesting ('We' maybe I would have used this has a title if its composed by me) . Thought provoking in the end. Good.

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