Monday, July 3, 2006

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Down the drink, and drink the beer
Push the brink, and hit the deer
You think you can, but you can’t steer
Life is fun for one more year
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Patrick Tolan
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Ruby Root 10 July 2006

Sorry Patrick, I am sure about this poem. It is not one of my favorites. I liked your other poems better. Oh well. You have great style when you write but I am not crazy about this one. Take care.

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