Sunday, April 12, 2009

Yosemite’s Grand Lady Comments

Rating: 5.0

Conceived on edge of rock and sky
Are snow melts dripping melodious beats
Forming rivulets that trickle leisurely by
Blending with springs from mountain peaks
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James Ronan
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Rory Hudson 17 April 2009

Effective use of language to create a rich image. I agree with Susan.

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Susan Bagley 13 April 2009

James, your works could easily be seen in some travel magazine along with a picture. You really should submit some of them. Very very nicely done. And I thought I painted word pictures, you are much more refined than I. Susan

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