Wednesday, June 6, 2012

Yo'Re Afraid, You'Re So Afraid Comments

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You're afraid, you're so afraid
To lose all that you have
You cry and cry, and make me sad
But I say you should be brave.
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Asper Grig
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Yasmin Khan 21 June 2013

Fear of losing something prevents to follow the heart's desire and deep pain is the fate, a brief write with deep meaning.

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Saadat Tahir 20 June 2013

mans eternal fear of the distant unknown portrayed well.. a message and coaxing of hope... a bold brave write liked

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Payal Parande 12 May 2013

a profound piece you have written make one wonder......very well done indeed

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Riffat Samad 03 December 2012

A wonderful piece of work!

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