Tuesday, November 25, 2008

Yin And Yang Comments

Rating: 4.8

Though you may have a dark soul,
or an evil mind.
there is always a shimmer and glimmer of hope.
a shining light set in your heart.
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Baden Ronie
COMMENTS
Charli Pinkney 22 August 2009

i feel you have really got the balance and meaning of yin and yang

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Kevin Eaglesfield 05 December 2008

Yes, nicely balanced and well put

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Phillip Mobley 04 December 2008

This is a great companion composition to my own 'I Am' piece. I love the contrasting illustrations. Great work indeed.

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Ivor Hogg 01 December 2008

Yin and yang form the perfect whole a balnce of light and darl feminine and masculine You present your thoughts in poetic prose with clarity

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C.H. Seow 29 November 2008

splendid Braden, splendid...it's a total different experience for me too see such a young guy like you, would be able to come out with something that associates yin and yang so appropriately...and it's definitely an inspiration for me as i'm just a year older than u r.. =D

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Ron Flowers 29 November 2008

Very well thought out my young friend. Keep on writing. Ron

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Sarah Matthews 28 November 2008

this poem was amazing, it really touched me. I in a way have a different view of yin and yang

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I really like it, and yes darkness and light are somehow intertwined.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 November 2008

You certainly have the yin and yang of poetic touch of writing one..............like this piece.Nice works Baden.

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Lee Cheng 25 November 2008

yin and yang, a theory from ancient China.It means two developing directions of object.

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Karla Bardanza 25 November 2008

Fantastic poem! 10! Hugs! Karla Bardanza

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