Saturday, July 11, 2009

Yielding Comments

Rating: 5.0

I lament the day of my first attempt
When all I wanted was just to snoop and try
And eventually made myself truly deserving of contempt
When I became vindictive and callous to everyone’s eye
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Reylan Loberternos
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Obinna Eruchie 15 July 2009

A passionate poem of going through difficulties and hanging on to hope, faith and love. Interesting.

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Lynn Glover 12 July 2009

This is a well written and structured poem. I like the rythem, that's what makes the poem, keep it up I give you a 10+++

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Lance Mead 12 July 2009

this was a very good read..its written really well. and i know exactly how you feel,

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