Saturday, June 24, 2023

Yeti's Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

And as I climb the mountain of discontent,
I sing the Yeti's song
Knowing you have decided to leave me here,
The slings of redempation are thrown to my heart
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LeeAnn Azzopardi
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The expectation that Yetis can "destroy" her sins takes the poet to the summit. The reader joins her, automatically. Nice one

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Richard Wlodarski 25 June 2023

GREAT GREAT POEM, LeeAnn! Hope you're able to see my comment!

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Sheeya Hacks 24 June 2023

Very well written poem I liked the flow and essence. Top Marks.

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Michael Cochrane 24 June 2023

Well written LeeAnn excellent x

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David Wood 24 June 2023

Charlotte Bronte once said, 'Even life for me had its gleams of sunshine'. We have to keep putting one step in front of the other, the next corner may open new opportunities.

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Anil Kumar Panda 24 June 2023

This is beautiful ink. Thanks.

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Anjandev Roy 24 June 2023

Profound piece.....thanks for sharing......

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LeeAnn Azzopardi

LeeAnn Azzopardi

Detroit Mich
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