Tuesday, September 7, 2021

Yet This Heart Moves On And On~ Comments

Rating: 5.0

A wish, a desire it keeps
Flies on the wings of dreams
Neither long for any destination
nor strives for a resting place
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M. Asim Nehal
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Mushfiq Gumma 23 May 2022

Awesome writing. Heart is the source of things that gives mind and body the thoughts.

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Kostas Lagos 10 September 2021

One of your best my friend!

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 September 2021

A beautiful and inspiring poem. The recurring lines enhanced the beauty of this well crafted write. To my Poem List.

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Poetic Sky 09 September 2021

Wonderful poetry.

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Martinez Salotori 09 September 2021

Terse and telling poem.

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Zoyza Da Vinka 08 September 2021

True..Neither afraid of the current Nor is fearful of the rocks Yet this heart moves on

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Okim otu 08 September 2021

Amidst tears and wailing nor well-being and joy, yet this heart moves on and on. Very thoughtful poem.

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Juhaina Tumlu 08 September 2021

Purity of heart nicely put together. Gr8 one.

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Ricky Magnathen 08 September 2021

It is restless and it dazzles in the mayhem It passes through sunshine and shadow..Brilliant

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Suzon Albert 08 September 2021

Wonderful poem. I admire your poem on love, heart and life.

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Mamta S 08 September 2021

Another gem of a poem. So well thought and written. Heart is always my fav. subject.

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Rajan Trajan Renganathan 07 September 2021

Heart is pure and it goes on and on as you mentined.5*

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M. Asim Nehal

M. Asim Nehal

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