# *yet The Night Sleeps*# Comments
it is yet night deep
I have to close my eyes now
For the next day's coffee
And a few spoons of dream
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i like the way you make the words flow you drowsuch nice poem. nice poem
a spoon full of dreams i love that nice wording.. Nice verses... Krista
i`m a dark preson so to me your poem are to happy but this one is ok to me
I understand you may not be happy with my comments on ypour poetry, they are honest nonetheless. Feel free to criticise my work in response.
You asked me to comment on your poetry. I am sorry, but your lack of command of the English language and the disjointed feel to your writing makes this impossible for me to read. My apologies if this offends but I would rather be honest.
A beautiful poem.... my favourite time - late night and half-sleep images.... it is romantic and deep and your wordplay is excellent.
Yes, yet the night sleeps! Pl. go through my 'LET THE NIGHT SLEEP' in the PH, viewed from a different angle!
Dr. Kar, Filled with the passion of one who truly writes from the heart...it is so lovely! I danced in between the words...in toe shoes... Dorothy
Beautiful imagery, your descriptives are sublime! HG: -) xx
Truly this piece speaks so loudly...so beautifully! This one is definetely one of my favorites...as I can feel what you are feeling.I can see what you see...and the pain of just existing at times seems to haunt this one...in such an unforgetable way. Truly touching my friend....thanx for sharing. wishing U much peace on this day Sub........ .Shelley.
'it is yet night deep I have to close my eyes now For the next day’s coffee And a few spoons of dream' What a perfect opening to this tenderhearted poem. Your words evoke the nocturnes of Chopin, in particular their superb performance by Arthur Rubinstein. Your weave a wealth of emotion into every line. Beautiful poem. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
This is an excellent write Dr. Kar! Great use of metaphors here! ! *10*! ! ! Best regards! ! Friend Thad
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7/28/2025 10:47:50 AM # 1.0.0
Awed by the beauty of words- - -It is yet night deep I have to close my eyes now For the next day's coffee and a few spoons of dream