Sunday, October 16, 2011

Yesteryears Comments

Rating: 3.5

Sunken with sorrow
In a mawkish way,
I used to loiter through the narrow
paths, to exhume my days.
...
Read full text

NEETHA SASIDHARAN
COMMENTS
Kanav Justa 17 January 2013

But those gone days were teachers. , , , , , , this i must say was the most beautiful part of the poem, , , , , , the way you wrote your poem was fabulous, , , ,

0 0 Reply

nice poem.the way you used short lines and meanwhile conveyed what you wanted to was great.and, even though it is late. congrats for the prize!

0 0 Reply
Vipins Puthooran 16 October 2011

It's a nice poem, , , I must say that the reality of life lies between the unknown pearls of birth and death...

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success